Year 3 students from Cloncurry State School have written a persuasive paragraph on the imaginative topic ‘Cloncurry should get a water park’.
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Here are their letters.
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Dear Cloncurry Council,
Cloncurry must have a water park.
Cloncurry definitely needs a water park because it is so hot we could die.
We need a water park because it is a wonderful place to see your family.
We must have a water park because imagine all the fun kids could have.
Ryley Macnamara
Dear Cloncurry Council,
Cloncurry must have a water park.
It is so hot we sweat straight away when we go outside.
Cloncurry must have a waterpark so we can have fun it will be fun everywhere in the water park.
Cloncurry kids love to have birthdays at a waterpark so other people enjoy the cake.
Junior Heslin
Dear Council,
Cloncurry is a hot place to live in and there are not many places for children to play in.
Children need a waterpark so they don’t get hot and sweaty.
Cloncurry needs a waterpark to have fun and cool down. We must have a waterpark in Cloncurry because kids need to have fun.
Chloe Sprenkeler
Dear Cloncurry Council,
Cloncurry needs a magnificently fun water park.
Cloncurry really needs a water park because it feels a hundred degrees sometimes.
We must have a water park to swim in every day. If we do people will be sure to come.
We must get a waterpark because it will have tonnes of toys to play with.
Courtney Thorpe
Dear Cloncurry Council,
Cloncurry really needs a fun water park. Cloncurry should have a fun water park because it is piping and boiling hot.
Cloncurry must have a fun water park because everyone will die of thirst.
Cloncurry is desperate to get a fun water park because it will be fun.
Latarnia Sollitt